**[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead]** has conducted evaluations of various commercial and industria

Usable once revised. A reviewer wants the wording tightened first.

Status

• Review verdict: revise
• Reusable as written: no
• Issues found: client_specific, person_name
• Reviewer note: Contains explicit placeholders for missing personnel names and references a specific past client program (FirstEnergy), requiring replacement with generic or current context.

Text

[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] has conducted evaluations of various commercial and industrial lighting, motors & drives, custom incentives, and HVAC sites under the Pennsylvania FirstEnergy C&I Program. In this evaluation, [MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] calculated energy use and energy savings using the Pennsylvania technical reference manual (TRM) as well as using metered baseline and as-built data.

Applicability

• Section: past_performance (corpus label other)
• Scope: mixed_context
• Observed documents: 6
• Years: 2011 to 2012
• Issuers: MISSING
• Program types: MISSING
• Jurisdictions: Oregon

Sources

• [F021171, paragraph:1404]
• [F021298, paragraph:1416]
• [F021391, paragraph:1404]
• [F021420, paragraph:1305]
• [F021446, paragraph:978]
• [F021685, paragraph:917]