**[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead]** has visited numerous commercial facilities in California and

Usable once revised. A reviewer wants the wording tightened first.

Status

• Review verdict: revise
• Reusable as written: no
• Issues found: client_specific, person_name
• Reviewer note: Block contains explicit placeholders for a person's name and references specific past clients (CPUC, PNM), requiring replacement with generic terms or current personnel before reuse.

Text

[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] has visited numerous commercial facilities in California and New Mexico for CPUC and PNM to assess building energy consumption. In those visits, [MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] evaluated building energy consumption and equipment performance.

Applicability

• Section: past_performance (corpus label other)
• Scope: mixed_context
• Observed documents: 6
• Years: 2011 to 2012
• Issuers: MISSING
• Program types: MISSING
• Jurisdictions: Oregon

Sources

• [F021171, paragraph:1323]
• [F021298, paragraph:1335]
• [F021391, paragraph:1321]
• [F021420, paragraph:1253]
• [F021446, paragraph:818]
• [F021685, paragraph:768]