**[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead]** has performed many energy audits - assessing current energy u

Usable once revised. A reviewer wants the wording tightened first.

Status

• Review verdict: revise
• Reusable as written: no
• Issues found: client_specific, person_name
• Reviewer note: Block references a specific individual via placeholder and uses gendered pronouns. Requires replacing the placeholder with a generic role and adjusting pronouns to be neutral for reuse.

Text

[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] has performed many energy audits - assessing current energy usage, and identifying potential energy savings. He has visited commercial, industrial, and agricultural facilities, and has assessed energy savings for a diversity of energy efficiency measures.

Applicability

• Section: personnel_bio (corpus label other)
• Scope: mixed_context
• Observed documents: 11
• Years: 2011 to 2013
• Issuers: Idaho Power Company;SACRAMENTO MUNICIPAL UTILITY DISTRICT RFP NO. 120136.CAB
• Program types: residential;small_business
• Jurisdictions: California;Idaho;Oregon

Sources

• [F020822, paragraph:625]
• [F021171, paragraph:1265]
• [F021298, paragraph:1277]
• [F021391, paragraph:1024]
• [F021420, paragraph:970]
• [F021442, paragraph:643]
• [F021446, paragraph:546]
• [F021685, paragraph:505]
• [F021833, paragraph:800]
• [F021942, paragraph:426]
• [F023038, paragraph:941]