**[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead]** was responsible for collection and analysis of whole-building

Usable once revised. A reviewer wants the wording tightened first.

Status

• Review verdict: revise
• Reusable as written: no
• Issues found: client_specific, person_name
• Reviewer note: Block contains a placeholder for a specific individual and uses gendered pronouns ('He'), making it non-generic. Requires replacing the placeholder with a generic role title and neutralizing pronouns.

Text

[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] was responsible for collection and analysis of whole-building and end-use electric and gas consumption data for residential, commercial, and industrial facilities. He was responsible for assessment of energy use for large facilities utilizing thermal storage systems and battery chargers.

Applicability

• Section: personnel_bio (corpus label other)
• Scope: mixed_context
• Observed documents: 5
• Years: 2011 to 2016
• Issuers: Idaho Power Company
• Program types: residential
• Jurisdictions: Idaho;Oregon

Sources

• [F001474, paragraph:120]
• [F020409, paragraph:572]
• [F020461, paragraph:346]
• [F020517, paragraph:494]
• [F020994, paragraph:1104]