**[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead]** conducted evaluation of various commercial new construction a

Usable once revised. A reviewer wants the wording tightened first.

Status

• Review verdict: revise
• Reusable as written: no
• Issues found: client_specific, person_name
• Reviewer note: Contains explicit placeholders for missing personnel names and references specific past clients (CPUC, PNM, NVE), requiring redaction and generalization before reuse.

Text

[MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] conducted evaluation of various commercial new construction and retrofit program by CPUC, PNM, and NVE. In this evaluation, [MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] calculated energy use from the baseline equipment and measure equipment.

Applicability

• Section: past_performance (corpus label other)
• Scope: mixed_context
• Observed documents: 14
• Years: 2011 to 2015
• Issuers: A Department of the City of Alameda;Entergy’s Utility companies:;ISSUED BY DEPARTMENT OF NATURAL RESOURCES AND ENVIRONMENTAL;ONTARIO POWER AUTHORITY
• Program types: commercial_industrial;demand_response;residential
• Jurisdictions: Arkansas;California;Delaware;Louisiana;Mississippi;Oregon;Texas;Vermont

Sources

• [F020822, paragraph:914]
• [F021171, paragraph:1317]
• [F021298, paragraph:1329]
• [F021391, paragraph:1315]
• [F021420, paragraph:1247]
• [F021442, paragraph:932]
• [F021446, paragraph:812]
• [F021685, paragraph:762]
• [F022810, paragraph:340]
• [F023559, paragraph:1165]
• [F023721, paragraph:364]
• [F023860, paragraph:364]
• [F024814, paragraph:636]
• [F029066, paragraph:620]