He is responsible for the implementation of end-use monitoring projects of all levels of complexity, including installin

Usable once revised. A reviewer wants the wording tightened first.

Status

• Review verdict: revise
• Reusable as written: no
• Issues found: other, person_name
• Reviewer note: Block contains a person placeholder and a gendered pronoun ('He') referencing a specific individual. Requires editing to remove personal references and generalize the subject for reuse.

Text

He is responsible for the implementation of end-use monitoring projects of all levels of complexity, including installing and removing monitoring and data-logging equipment, and verifying, retrieving and validating data. [MISSING: credentialed individual - ask Proposal Lead] has conducted verification and data collection efforts at thousands of residential, commercial, industrial, and agricultural facilities.

Applicability

• Section: personnel_bio (corpus label other)
• Scope: mixed_context
• Observed documents: 9
• Years: 2011 to 2012
• Issuers: SACRAMENTO MUNICIPAL UTILITY DISTRICT RFP NO. 120136.CAB
• Program types: MISSING
• Jurisdictions: California;Oregon

Sources

• [F020822, paragraph:679]
• [F021171, paragraph:1141]
• [F021298, paragraph:1153]
• [F021391, paragraph:1078]
• [F021420, paragraph:1050]
• [F021442, paragraph:697]
• [F021446, paragraph:562]
• [F021685, paragraph:520]
• [F021833, paragraph:925]